Audience Feedback
Article 1: Is war the answer? Thomas
Legg
Is the layout appropriate for the article? Yes
Is the photography appropriate? What possible improvements could
there be? Photography is appropriate, not much improvement needed
Do you enjoy reading the article content? Yes
Is the writing style appropriate? I think it’s a bit too informative
and appeals to maybe an older audience.
What improvements do you think can be made to the written content?
Not digress from the topic, some writing was a bit bulky and unnecessary
Overall what would you rate this article? 8/10
Is the article professional and do you think it would be featured in
a games magazine? Yes, I think it is and would
Article 2: Pre-Order Nightmares
Do you approve of the layout to this article? Yes
Are you a fan of alternate layouts in magazines? No
Is the content appropriate/non-preachy? Content is appropriate,
maybe a bit biased towards not pre ordering
Is the model appropriate? Yes
Is the content mature and professional? Yes
Overall what would you rate the article? 7/10
Do you think the article is professional and would feature in a
games magazine? Yes
Article 3- The Low Budget Review
Is this similar to other reviews? No
Is the content thorough and fun to read? Yes
Do you approve of the layout of the article? Yes
Do you like the imagery of the article? Yes
Are there any improvements to either image or content you think
needed to be made? No improvements needed
What would you rate the article? 9/10
Do you think this article would feature in a games magazine? Yes
Front Cover
Is the front cover professional looking? Yes
Is the header memorable and eye-catching? Yes
Are the sell lines enticing and interesting? Yes
Do you approve of the imagery used in the article? No
Should the imagery be changed? Yes
If you saw this would you buy it? Yes
Audience Feedback Rian
Article 1: Is war the answer?
Is the layout appropriate for the article?
Yes, the layout is suitable for the type of
article.
Is the photography appropriate? What possible improvements could
there be?
The photography and the intended meaning of
the imagery is good, only improvement that could happen is to show less humour
within the first photo as there really isn’t that much comedy in war.
Do you enjoy reading the article content?
I thoroughly enjoyed reading the first article
as fills in the appropriate information and the sufficient
Is the writing style appropriate?
The bloodied style effect is suitable for the
article
What improvements do you think can be made to the written content?
If the age group of the article is for age
group of 14-21 then you may need to think about the consistency of the article,
if I was walking along and I saw the heading “is war the answer” I would be
intrigued, but once opened to the double page spread and saw the extensive text
I may put it down.
Overall what would you rate this article?
8 out of 10
Is the article professional and do you think it would be featured in
a games magazine?
It has the right type of features to be
presented in an official magazine just depending on what magazine it is?
Article 2: Pre-Order Nightmares
Do you approve of the layout to this article?
I am really fond of this article more than the
other one.
Are you a fan of alternate layouts in magazines?
Absolutely being different and not following
the crowd is how you can make a successful magazine.
Is the content appropriate/non-preachy?
Yeah, it’s appropriate may need to have a few
spell checks, have a few people read it over.
Is the model appropriate?
The modeling is a lot more official then the
other one, and has been taken more seriously.
Is the content mature and professional?
Yes, the content is a lot more professional
then the other one
Overall what would you rate the article?
9 out of 10
Do you think the article is professional and would feature in a
games magazine?
The article works a lot better than the other
one as it flows better
Article 3- The Low Budget Review
Is this similar to other reviews?
Not really, like other reviews I tend to find
them kind of short and simple minded, so it’s a lot easier to process, either
the text it way out of league for the “Low Budget” or it may need a proof read
Is the content thorough and fun to read?
No im afraid, it’s a little too much for me,
have all types of readers in mind.
Do you approve of the layout of the article?
Absolutely! I do like the layout on how it’s
done.
Do you like the imagery of the article?
The imagery of the article is exactly how
Rockstar, would have had their characters for the official game.
Are there any improvements to either image or content you think
needed to be made?
None
What would you rate the article?
8 1/2 out of 10
Do you think this article would feature in a games magazine?
Yes, it’s got all the right features in all
the right places
Front Cover
Is the front cover professional looking?
Yes
Is the header memorable and eye-catching?
The type of font for the front cover is eye
catching.
Are the sell lines enticing and interesting?
They’re a little small and is hard to read to
be enticed by.
Do you approve of the imagery used in the article?
Yes
Should the imagery be changed?
No
If you saw this would you buy it?
Im afraid not.
Audience Feedback Carl
Article 1: Is war the answer?
Is the layout appropriate for the article?
I feel that the layout of the article is
appropriate. The position of images and headings doesn’t interfere with the
main body of the text.
Is the photography appropriate? What possible improvements could
there be?
The photography is suited to the article though
images could be used where one of the models isn’t laughing.
Do you enjoy reading the article content?
I found the article rather enjoyable to read.
Is the writing style appropriate?
The writing style seems appropriate for the
content, being both a mix of casual and serious.
What improvements do you think can be made to the written content?
I think in some places the grammar could have been
improved slightly.
Overall what would you rate this article?
I would rate it at 7 or 8 out of 10. It’s quite a
good article overall.
Is the article professional and do you think it would be featured in
a games magazine?
I’m not sure that it’s professional enough to be put
in a gaming magazine but it’s almost there.
Article 2: Pre-Order Nightmares
Do you approve of the layout to this article?
The article has a good layout, everything being in
a logical place that doesn’t detract from the article itself.
Are you a fan of alternate layouts in magazines?
I am, it makes it more interesting to read.
Is the content appropriate/non-preachy?
I feel that it is, fairly giving across a
well-structured argument.
Is the model appropriate?
Yes, he looks appropriately displeased with the
game he’s holding.
Is the content mature and professional?
The majority of the content is mature though the
odd phrase could be changed to sound more professional.
Overall what would you rate the article?
I would rate this article 8 out of 10.
Do you think the article is professional and would feature in a
games magazine?
Yes.
Article 3- The Low Budget Review
Is this similar to other reviews?
Yes.
Is the content thorough and fun to read?
Yes.
Do you approve of the layout of the article?
Yes.
Do you like the imagery of the article?
Yes.
Are there any improvements to either image or content you think
needed to be made?
No.
What would you rate the article?
8 out of
10.
Do you think this article would feature in a games magazine?
Yes.
Front Cover
Is the front cover professional looking?
Yes.
Is the header memorable and eye-catching?
Yes.
Are the sell lines enticing and interesting?
No.
Do you approve of the imagery used in the article?
Yes.
Should the imagery be changed?
No.
If you saw this would you buy it?
I would consider it.
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